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Ace the University of Michigan-Ann Arbor '23-'24 Supplemental Essays

Written by Admit Hero Team | Jul 20, 2023 6:43:30 PM

Hello, Wolverines in the making! As you gear up for your University of Michigan-Ann Arbor application, we're here to provide you with helpful strategies to tackle their unique supplemental essays.

Let's dissect each prompt:

The "Why Michigan?" Essay

"Describe the unique qualities that attract you to the specific undergraduate College or School to which you are applying at the University of Michigan."

Your answer to this prompt should illustrate why UMich is not just another top university for you. Dive deep into what draws you to the specific program you're applying to at UMich.

Example: 

"Ever since I was a child, my curiosity was captivated by the mysteries of the human mind. This interest sparked a passion for understanding biological mechanisms, particularly those related to brain functions and disorders. The University of Michigan's College of Literature, Science, and the Arts (LSA) offers an outstanding opportunity to further delve into these topics, making it the ideal place for me to pursue my undergraduate studies.

What I appreciate the most about LSA is its interdisciplinary approach to education. I value LSA's emphasis on studying a broad range of subjects, as I believe that diverse academic exposure contributes to a well-rounded perspective. For instance, LSA's Requirement for Diverse Communities encourages students to explore different cultures, histories, and social structures. As someone who appreciates diverse perspectives, I am eager to explore courses like "Cultural Neuroscience" which intersect my main interest in neuroscience with an understanding of how culture can shape our cognition.

Beyond academic versatility, UMich stands out through the research opportunities it presents. The Undergraduate Research Opportunity Program (UROP) provides an immersive environment to engage in research early in my academic journey. My interest in neurobiology will be well catered to, as UROP has previously included research projects focusing on neurodegenerative disorders like Alzheimer's, a topic I have been interested in since volunteering at a local elderly care facility.

Beyond the academics, the vibrant student life at UMich is another compelling aspect. The Maize Rage's spirit at basketball games, the valuable initiatives driven by student-led organizations such as 'M-HEAL' that work on global health design projects, and the tradition of painting The Rock on Hill Street; all contribute to a dynamic campus culture that aligns with my personal and academic aspirations.

By weaving my passion for neurobiology with the diverse academic, research, and social opportunities at UMich, I believe I can make a meaningful contribution to the Wolverine community and beyond."

The Community Essay

"Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it."

Focus on a community that has significantly influenced your identity or perspective. This could be anything from your family, cultural group, to a club or organization.

Example: 

"From a young age, I was immersed in a vibrant, multigenerational community. My grandparents lived just a few doors away, and I grew up surrounded by the laughter of neighborhood kids, the wisdom of the elderly, and the unity of communal gatherings. This environment taught me the value of diversity, communication, and connection, forming a basis for my understanding of what community means.

What strikes me about the University of Michigan is its similar sense of camaraderie. The blend of academic rigor and passionate spirit cultivates a dynamic environment that extends beyond classrooms into student life. The university's commitment to creating a diverse and inclusive community aligns with my personal values and experiences. From joining the Multi-Ethnic Student Affairs to participating in Intergroup Relations, I look forward to learning from and contributing to the Michigan community.

Moreover, I am inspired by UMich's investment in community service, mirrored by my passion for volunteering. I was an active member of a local service group back in high school, organizing events to support low-income families in our area. UMich's Ginsberg Center, with its focus on local engagement, appears as a perfect platform for me to continue such contributions.

At UMich, I don't just see a prestigious university, I see a close-knit community that supports one another, and a place where my service and leadership skills can make a real impact. In joining this vibrant Wolverine family, I plan not only to learn but also to contribute, ensuring that the spirit of togetherness and mutual growth is upheld."

Remember, UMich is interested in learning more about you as a person – your experiences, passions, and how you would contribute to their diverse community. Take this opportunity to present your most authentic self.

Finally, keep in mind the essays' word limits (550 words for the first and 300 words for the second), and spend time refining and editing your responses.

Go ahead, Wolverines, unleash your creative prowess, and take a step closer to your dream of studying at the University of Michigan!